For example, if I were to do this with your piece (which is what your asking for when you ask people to review and critique ), I'd say the sample quality isn't good, much of the syncopation that is in the source (and makes it colorful) is lacking, and the mixing & mastering is poor. Instead of just absorbing your favorite music, listen to exactly what you like (or don't like) about it and make a mental note of it. No, if you want to get started early, by all means do so! Your brother DS is a well respected remixer here at OC (as I'm sure you know), so take advantage of that and ask him about particular aspects of composition.Īlso, when you listen to music, start listening to it actively. Why wait until High School? When it comes to composition, it's not like they'll teach you very much. I'm still in middle school but I'm going to learn how to write music in high school. Also a lot of the accompaniment lines are pretty repetitive - it seems almost like some are repeating more 'because there's nothing better to put there' then 'because this is what the song needs there', you know? A little more variation would go a long way. So you've got a good idea, but what sounds like a rough draft, basicly - it needs a lot of polish, and swapping in higher quality instruments for what seem like essentially 'placeholders'. things are balanced a little better, for sure. The bright piano/strings at 1:28 are good, and this is where the song feels like it starts to pick up. Pulling back the background instruments and focusing on it would make it sound better, more epic. Especially at :56 when that dark bass hit comes in - it just gums everything up. The reverb is pretty heavy on a lot of the instruments, especially for those runs of 8th or 16th notes - things start sounding muddy, and you can't really pick out the parts that the individual instruments are playing. (or things that sound similar, to give you the benefit of the doubt) It's like using Comic Sans in a design job - most pros try to stay away from it, and with the wide selection of free softsynths and samples available online, there's just no reason to use those. Hikari Todoku Bashou De - Yuujou no Shirushi (ending, ep.First off, I've got to admit that I don't like the instrument choice - it sounds like default MIDI soundfonts, especially that bass, that 'plucked' thing that starts at :06, and those drum samples - they're so overplayed and easily recognizable that they're distracting.22-29)ĭoobee Doowop Communication (ending, ep. Nenji Rokushakudama/ Nenjiro/ NapalmMan.Walk my way, long and winding, even on the days when I collapse from exhaustionĮven if I can't see any light on the road ahead ![]() ![]() There's no map to the road no one's taken yet The real me, the one who is always hiding in front of everyone Please be quiet, I'm trying to wade through the noise So if you keep your eyes closed and start running, you'll find yourself in the futureĪnswer must be somewhere, you know me better than anyone If I reach out, I could reach the tomorrow I've been looking forĪnother day tomorrow, you can never go back to yesterday They're stretched out to every corner of the world The piano wires are so thin that no one can move Korekara iku saki ni hikari nado mienakute moĪnother day tomorrow, whenever I get so vulnerable, hurt or lostĪnswer must be somewhere, I keep calling your name Walk my way, Long and winding tsukarehatete taorete shimau hi mo Mada dare mo itta koto no nai michi ni chizu wa nai kara Saa tsutaete yo takaburu sono kanjō ni makasete Min'na no mae ja itsumo sugata o kakushiteruĪri no mama no watashi ga katari hajimeteiru Jibun no kokoro no koe mimi o sumaseterukara Onegai shizukani shite noizu o kakiwakete ![]() ![]() Me o tojita mama hashiridaseba soko wa miraiĪnswer Must Be Somewhere watashi no koto dare yori mo shitteru Te o nobashitara sagashiteta asu ni todokisō na noĪnother Day Tomorrow kinō e wa kesshite susumenai kara Sore wa tsumetaku hada ni kuikonda totan niĭokoka de shikakerareta torappu o ugokasu Sekai no sumizumi made harimegurasareteru Kon'na ni mubōbi ni kizutsuitari mayou tabiĪnswer Must Be Somewhere tsuyoku tsuyoku iikikaseru yō ni Another Day Tomorrow yami no naka de nemutteiru dake de
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